The Never-Ending Story Thread.

[Solid Snake]

RULES:

Each entry must be at least one full, complete sentence.

Each entry must coincide with previous entries. (such as Bob, needs to be Bob through the whole story, the red car had better stay red, and so on and so forth)

You must not post twice in a row.

Posts should be centered on the page, like the text your reading now, and idealy in bold, black lettering.

Story should be linear, and attention should be payed to building a plot, developing characters, and so on and so forth.

To post, one must read the entire thread first.

Think you have the idea? Then post!

Not sure if you have the idea? Best to wait until you do to post.

Pro-Tips:
You can open two tabs, and write your entry, then check in the other tab if someone has beaten you to posting a reply.

(If an accident still happens, and two people reply to the same entry, it wont make sense.
In such a case, the second poster should edit their post, to be a blank post.)

Remember, we are writing a story, have fun, but if things get to random, or ridiculous, it wont be enjoyable.



The opening of the story:
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Hunger.
I Cant see anything.
Ouch, hurts to move.
Where am I?
Lets see, the last thing I remember was talking to Sarah.

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[KarmaChameleon1337]

She was on her period,
and had a bat in her hand.​

 

[laurie]

Sarah, yes my Sarah
She is so volatile at "that time of the month"
But I still amy surprised that she pushed me off the deck
How did get get a bat during the day?
Sarah my Sarah​

 

[ChamomilleCame]

Indeed, Sarah is a cranky one.
While I was falling, I remembered she had
said that she had learned how to summon
bats in summer camp. I don't know why
such animal should go near this "human"​

 

[okiroo]

It doesnt matter anymore. She must not love me and i understand after what i did to her..its better this way anyways.what are those red eyes looking at me? so dark.. i cant make out the animal. so hungry...​

 

[Solid Snake]

I passed out from exhaustion.
What was that nonsense I was thinking about before?
No matter, the mushrooms had worn off now, cant use those as a food source I guess.
Theres light coming in now, about 20 meters above me.
Not sure if I can climb it, or fit through the hole though.
Maybe I should just keep going forward.
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[pssh]

My legs hurt so much, but I've got to keep trying. I need to keep going forwards.
Those eyes are stuck in my mind. I can't help but think there was something familiar in those eyes.​

 

[okiroo]

deep growls are now surronding me. red eyes...everywhere. a scream escapes me even though i attempt to hold it back. "NO...it cant be....sarah please...i didnt mean to.." another pair of red eyes fix on me. suddenly i understand...the blood..the eyes..the bats. shes no human.​

 

[Red7ny1]

She's creeping closer , ever so slowly .
I've got to find something to protect myself with
or surely it will spell my demise .... what can I use
as a weapon ??!! Think , man ... think !!!​

 

[ChamomilleCame]

I checked my pockets as quick as possible and found a large Swiss-army knife that I had acquired a while ago. I tried scratching Sarah, but it seemed like she felt no pain! I couldn't hear my own voice. There was a group of monsters around me. No where to hide.​

 

[chamguy]

But, Suddenly! a flash appreared in the distance,
as I grew more faint I saw this light grow even brigher.
I finally blacked out. ​

 

[Solid Snake]

 

[ijmccollum]

It is so quite now, you can actually hear the intensisty in the air.

 

[Eltortu]

My shorts pocket had a hole in it
I found a quarter and put it in my pocket
I found another quarter and put it in my pocket
After awhile I realized it was the same quarter falling thru the hole in my pocket.
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[Solid Snake]

I cant stop pocketing it though.

That is when Nurse Sarah came to talk to me.
Over two years ago.

I was pretty bad off then, they had kept me drugged for five years.
I swayed in and out of reality, hardly remembering who I was.
Sarah had helped free me from the viscous cycles that had become my existence.

Where was I now? Where was she?
It seemed like so long ago the last time we talked.

The last time we talked...

...8 months ago...in Кащенко [Kashchenko]...

Sarah,"Hey Jack, still haven't quit smoking I see."

"Sarah! I didn't expect to see you here?"

"Yes well, I came to tell you I'm leaving."

"Leaving? Why now? Were will you go?"

"I cant say just yet, but I wanted to make sure you would be ok, and to give you something before I go."

"What? No, it doesn't make any sense, after all you went through to stay, why go now?"

"There's some things you should know Jack, but now is not the time. I cant explain more. Here, take this, and I promise, I will see you soon."

The lighter she gave me had a coded message in it, that I still cant make sense of.

It was a good lighter though.



I awake to the siren noise again.
It looks like Im in an alley.

Its almost completely dark, but I can make out fencing on one side, and brick on the other. I start to move away from the direction the siren is coming from.

There is a crashing noise ahead, and something that sounds like footsteps.

Frozen in fear, I need to decide what to do.
I remember the lighter, and scramble to use it.

Theres a wheelchair in the alley, one of the wheels is still moving.

Definitely footsteps, loud, running away from me.

I run to follow them as they trail off in the distance, getting quieter and quieter.

I reach a door in the fencing, leading out to the street.
All is quiet now.
I can see without the lighter.
I step onto the street.


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[Decadancin]

What?!?
The diamond district? Damn!
I totally forgot.
Have to get the ring.
And this time I will NOT put it in that pocket!

Oh Sarah, I can't believe you are gone.

Its been so long...​

 

[Trace]

... that I thought this thread was dead and gone.
Too bad.​

 

[Eltortu]

I read someone wished this thread be gone
like castles made of sand
melts into the sea
eventually
Foxy Lady?
think not​